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Tuesday, 14 October 2003

Arabic Gulf(((home work))
There are many interesting things we can do at Arabin Gulf .first, we can go to the island in Arabin Gulf to swim with our friends .This is very nice and healthy activity. Second, we can use a dive equipment to dive .The Arabin Gulf have a lot of fish and a nice coral. Finally, we can take a jetboat from any islands. This is a wonderful trip and so lovely way to see the Arabin Gulf .As you can see, there are many things to do in Arabin Gulf.

Posted by cmasq8 at 8:03 PM

Updated: Tuesday, 14 October 2003 9:53 PM

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Sunday, 19 October 2003 - 12:48 AM

Name: Buthaina (Instructor)

Fahad,
Your paragraph is much better than the previous one.I can see that you recoganize the role of each senetence in a paragraph. You have achieved a good organization of a paragraph, starting with a main idea that is followed by supporting sentences and supporting details, smoothly.
One thing I would like to indicate, you have a few grammatical errors. I'm sure if you proofread or edit your paragraph you woill find them. They include Capitalization and missing out, using the indefinte article "a", in some senetnces.
Here are some sites where you could practice, these grammatical points.
To practice Capitalization, go to the URL: http://www.learnenglish.org.uk/grammar/archive/capital_letters.html
To practice Articles,go to the URL: http://a4esl.org/q/h/vm/fampeople.html

Good Luck!
Buthaina (Ms)